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Copy Connoisseur: 7 Killer Bullets Shown to Melt the Cold Shoulder and Boost Your Conversion Rates

Nathaniel Bastin
4 min readFeb 27, 2020

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Killer Bullets: A secret weapon for your copy-based ads

Okay, you’ve written a headline for your ad. You know exactly the action you want a prospective customer to take. You’re almost there, but not quite.

How do you go about transitioning smoothly from headline to CTA in a way that avoids your prospect losing interest and maintains — or increases — their desire to act?

In my opinion, there is no more effective a tool than the bullet point. Or, to be more precise, several bullet points.

I recently read “Breakthrough Copywriting” by David Garfinkel which covers almost every component of what makes a successful copy-based ad.

“Breakthrough Copywriting” by David Garfinkel

The book describes bullet points as a product in motion. They are designed to create curiosity, excitement, desire and anxiety.

Significantly, they should not be a literal description of what your product is, but, rather, the reasons why a prospective customer would want them.

For a customer, the tension and suspense induced by a successfully crafted bullet point should only be dispelled by either reading on or (better…

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Nathaniel Bastin
Nathaniel Bastin

Written by Nathaniel Bastin

Full Stack Brand Builder | Published in “The Startup”, “Better Marketing” & “Entrepreneur’s Handbook” | x.com/NB_Branding

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